Show HN: Review our Landing Page
https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=2497996HN - we have finished our first iteration of a landing page for Rewardly, an electronic credit card based loyalty program, and we'd love to get feedback.
We decided to keep text to as minimal as possible but we may have gone overboard. Our main concern is that users will not really understand what this product is in our strive for simplicity. We plan to have more detailed information on the "How It Works" page but your feedback on the issue would be awesome.