Ask HN: What do you think of my kickstarter video?

I'm building an athletic apparel brand for men. I started working on the idea 8 months ago and am now launching the first product on kick-starter. I'm confident about the superiority of the product after getting validation from many potential customers, but I would love to get some feedback on the kickstarter video I made. Provided that I'm able to reach out to a large audience, do you think I can exceed my kickstarter goal with this video, or do you think i should make a new one at the cost of launching on kickstarter later? Thanks!

http://preview.yathletics.com