I've redesigned my startup's landing page. What do you think?

by akos • 14 years ago

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zio99• 14 years ago

Criticism is easy and I don't want to rain on your parade. After all, what do I know. Keep doing your thing, don't stop. But here's a few things that came to mind:

The name reminded me of eatlime http://www.techsnack.net/eatlime-free-online-private-file-sh... which now pivoted to twitvid. And the scrolling image snippet looks better here: http://freshdesk.com/ because of a splash of background color.

The lime part of your logo is too blurry. You can get a better logo font from here: http://www.myfonts.com/ And I'd make your footnotes lighter grey in smaller print. Also try to do with less text on the invite box. For an example scroll to this order section here: http://sachagreif.com/ebook/

More design inspiration here: http://startupframework.tumblr.com/post/26696517701/design-a...

All in all, great that you've done a landing page. It's the first step of many, and I'll be looking forward to seeing more. Best wishes!

stonnyfrogs• 14 years ago

"We are making the site with a useful UI/UX, so that debates and opinions are in the center."

great, I was looking for a place where I can argue on the internet and also had a useful ui/ux.

I've redesigned my startup's landing page. What do you think?

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