Here are my suggestions:
- I don't know how resumes in NZ need to be formatted. Here are some resources that I found:
http://www.prospects.ac.uk/example_cvs.htm (A Skills-based CV seems to be what you want to do)
http://www.careers.govt.nz/how-to-get-a-job/cvs-and-cover-le...
- I suggest not being creative when formatting your resume or CV unless you are applying for designing jobs.
- Remove the Interests section or include only the interests that relate to the jobs that you are applying for. Definitely remove the line "Attempting to become a creative chef".
- Integrate some of the major keywords that a job description has into your resume or cover letter if applicable
- If LinkedIn is popular in your country, definitely set up a LinkedIn profile
- Create a different version of your resume with more focus on experience like the Traditional one mentioned here: http://www.prospects.ac.uk/example_cvs.htm and see if that works better.
I hope that helps. Best of luck!