grammerscule

Frankly, I couldn't get past the grammar. And spelling. And blatant typos. You so lack an attention to detail that I wonder if you might have a learning disorder.

Or you don't read. Please read. Read everything you can. Read fiction, non-fiction, cereal boxes, "newspapers", graphic novels, the internet. Read anything. It's kata for communication. If you can't or won't read, you'll forever suffer from an inability to communicate effectively. You will feel this most acutely when communicating in written form, but incomplete or incorrect sharing of your context in any form will contribute to your perceived disease.