Ask HN: Joining an Incubator. Concerned About 2 Items in The Contract. Advice? 17 years ago
With regard to negotiating this, i'd suggest to delete item (1) in a first turnaround of the draft agreement and, if they don't accept the deletion, to change it to some sort of right to information or observer's role at meetings.
With regard to item (2), water it down to non sensitive information. This should be acceptable as this seems to be, as jlees points out, only for statistical and promotional reasons.