Show HN: My Product Landing Page for SMS Marketing

Hi All.

I realize that SMS marketing is a crowded field, however, I believe there are still some opportunities with the right product. With that being said, I wanted to test the interest before building the product with a landing page.

As this is my first Show HN, would love to hear some feedback as to what changes may be needed, what works, what doesn't work. Since there's no product yet, there's no screenshots I can show so its more about the messaging and gauging interest.

I've reached out to 2000+ local businesses whose revenue is driven by foot traffic by postal mail and going to test adwords.

Link is: http://dealora.com